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Tuesday, August 17, 2021

World of ice

One cold night in the middle of winter there was a family who lived on the farm that they owned.

In the family there were 2 sisters and a mum and a dog, their dad had moved away. Suddenly

they all  woke up because they heard very strong wind and the house was shaking. 1 minute

later they went outside and they saw that one of their weatherboards had come off. Next 4 more

weatherboards came off and then all of the rest of the weatherboards came off. They saw the

doghouse fly away in the big storm and then they saw the chimney falling down and landing on

the bikes. The girls were crying and then they saw the whole house collapse and almost fell on

them. The neighbour's trampoline had flown away and they were standing outside and all 

looking very scared. Next they helped the  neighbours look after their cows, sheep, pigs and

horses. The storm had also ruined the neighbours house as well as their house. Then they

heard the police sirens. 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Lara, Wow this is an intelligent piece of work.

    How long did it take you to finish?

    I really love this work. It is very inspiring to see you working very hard. Well thats all I wanted to say. Bye for now.

    Warm regards: Pasimati.

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